This is the opening segment of my first novel, a WWII novel of intrigue and suspense that crosses three continents. Inspired by true events, the story follows a stash of plundered Nazi treasure. The novel was a quarter-finalist in a contest that Amazon ran, and also won the Florida Writers' Association Royal Palm Literary Award.
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All the best,
G. Thomas Gill
LAND OF FIRE
Chapter 1
Jose Guzman peered
through the darkness as he piloted the battered old fishing boat upriver. “Keep a sharp watch, boys,” he called. “The channel along here is as twisted as the
penis of a pig. Remember, there will be
no money for any of us if we don’t get a full load of shrimp.”
“Yes, Papa.” Tomas rubbed his sleepy eyes nudged his
cousin Miguel, “Wake up,” he whispered, “or Papa will use you for bait.”
Miguel jerked,
“I’m awake,” he complained, “stop poking me.”
“How long before
we get home, papa?” Tomas asked, holding his nose against the pungent smell of
the salt marsh. “It stinks here.”
“Get used to it
son, it’s the smell of money.”
Jose rigged a lamp
to the end of a pole and hung it over the bow.
All through the night they dipped their nets into the pool of light, and
filled their tubs to overflowing. Shrimp
weren’t the only things that gravitated to the light. As they drifted through the Rio Plata marshes,
droves of insects swarmed toward the glowing lamp, causing the fishermen to
curse the buzzing hordes that flew into their ears and mouths. A large school of pejerreye, feeding on the smaller crustaceans that swam into the
light had accompanied the shrimp into their nets. The shrimp ran large and would fetch a good
price on the docks of Buenos Aires. And the pejerreye
were prized for their delicate flavor; the sale of these silver fish would
provide a welcome bonus. The night’s
work would keep the family fed for two weeks at least.
Homeward bound, a
a mild chop disturbed the river’s surface, and it was a good thing for the
fishermen. The weight of the catch
caused the small boat to ride low in the dark water. Occasionally, a larger wave would wash over
the gunwale, causing the boys to grab for the bailing buckets.
Jose listened
carefully to the chugging of the Gray Marine engine as it powered them
upriver. The steady firing of the four
cylinders assured him they would have no trouble reaching home before
breakfast. The sound of the engine
blended with the slapping of waves against the bow to create a monotonous
rhythm that made him fight to stay awake.
Jose gazed at the stars as he steered the craft and wondered if the
night’s work would net enough profit to allow him to freshen the faded and
scabby remains of the paint that now clung reluctantly to the lapstrake
hull. He knew the boat was sound and
worthy of investment. It wouldn’t take
much to make the old twenty foot workboat as good as new. Perhaps there would be some money left over
for paint.
“Papa, something is floating in the water,
straight ahead!” Tomas called. The cry
split the night and Jose spun the wheel.
Reluctantly, the laden boat came to starboard. In the dim pre-dawn light the boys could
barely make out a shape in the water.
“Good eyes, Tomas,” yelled Jose.
He didn’t want to risk losing the crew, the boat or the catch as he
slowed the engine for a better look.
“Is it a log?”
Jose called. Sometimes, logs would float
downriver from deep in the interior. If
it was the right type of wood, like algarroba
or ebony, it would be a valuable find.
“Bring it alongside and let’s see what it is.”
Miguel grabbed a
gaff and dragged the debris alongside the boat.
He struggled to raise the gaff.
“It’s heavy, Uncle, it must be a log.”
Grunting, he added, “Tomas, give me a hand here.” Together, the two boys strained to lift the
burden.
“You don’t have to
bring it on board, just raise it up enough so I can see what type of wood it
is. If it’s worth anything, I’ll tow it
behind us. Hang on, here I come.”
Jose cut the
engine and edged forward, lamp in hand.
Miguel and Tomas renewed their grip on the gaff and heaved. The burden began to rise. “Just a little more,” Tomas grunted.
Both boys screamed
as a man’s face, white as the belly of a fish, bobbed above the gunwale. Miguel nearly dropped the gaff as Tomas
crossed himself, muttering softly, “Madre de Dios.”
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